I walk towards them. While crossing them, I hear her say, "You're always late, bro!"
:) Good!
I see her again, this time at a shopping mall, with her brother. A certain guy walks to them, pleasantly greets her, and I think, "This must be her boyfriend!"
As it turns out, he walks beside her brother and holds his hand, as if they were a couple!
:) Good!
I see her yet again, this time in a pub, with some other guy I don't recognize. They are talking and laughing and I think, "This surely must be her boyfriend!"
Another girl, probably her friend meets them, and that guy and her friend kiss.
:) Good!
The next time I see her, she is alone, walking down the road towards library. I walk in the opposite direction, but change my mind and go to library instead, after a couple of minutes.
The library, as usual is occupied with a handful of students, most of them reading magazines. I scan the library for her and see her sitting at a corner seat in the inner part of the library with few books
I think, this is it, talk to her; but what if she's busy?
"Excuse me, miss..." and I glance at her notebook, and don't find her name on it. :(
She looks up at me from the book.
"Hi," I raise my hand in an open palm gesture. Her nonchalant look isn't reassuring.
"I didn't mean to bother you, but I saw you reading this book and remembered you were in my batch but in other section, so..." I pause, look at her book, then look at her.
Next Episode
23 comments:
your non-fiction piece for the course?
Nope. That's different.
nice..
you have certainly piqued my interest for the next part :)
Anna,
Plz write the 2nd ASAP. Ur fans r waiting.
BTW, I 've a suggestion for the climax. What if the girl turns out to be the same whom u had met in ur childhood. So, the story 'll end like -- "..and there are ever happy ".
nice 1 scientist. when is the 2nd part coming? make it b4 2012. i want to read it before dying.
Your biggest problem is that YOU THINK. Buddy, why do u think always think NEGATIVE??
Hoping there will be something really nice in the part to follow.
All The Best :)
Second part better be good .. and worth the wait!! You just stopped where the curiosity was build .. x-(
I like it. Waiting for the next part.
Thank you everyone for such an overwhelming response... the sequel would be out soon... :)
well there's only one possibility left now ... if she's not into guys ... u know the other type .. :P
she's probably not into the guys... :D just like @nks pointed out.. haha :D
nice post yaar....
Gud one..... but I second GKB's thoughts :)
Hey Abhi. Nice One. Waiting for the next part.
our writing skills improve day by day ;)
It was good; but knowing your fascination for tragedy and drama, I can imagine how the next part will be.
wao.. that was seriously good!! waiting 4 the next part!!
dude wrie the 2nd asap w8ing to read it. :)
Scientist I m eagerly waiting for the next part . I hope that u wud add some funny punches in dat n it won't end on a tragic note..:)
Waiting for the second part....This is nice one!!!
good one boy... you remind me of someone...
Succeeded in picturing the incidents :) . Hope next parts will have something which nobody can guess.
nice ....... ekta kapoor should hire you
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