Thursday, October 09, 2008

Gonna miss the days of our lives

today in my dream, in my deep sleep,
what I saw was what I now feel,

i'm gonna miss these days,
the days we've been together,
and had all the fun and pleasure,
i'm gonna miss these days,
the days that looked like forever,
but in the end seemed so less
these days of our lives...

the days are gone, leaving memories behind,
the bonds made stronger by the passage of time,
now we walk away on our paths of destiny or dream,
perhaps to get together later when our paths meet.

whatever the future be like,
it will never be the same,
like these days of our lives...

17 comments:

Paradox said...

Wow... it was actually really good... I usually don't like the poems written by amateurs... but this looked genuine... it rhymed.. and more than that there a clarity in the flow of the 'theme idea' ... gr8 job !!!

Manish said...

awesome man......
its truly awesome :)

prateekgv said...

its good. neat and clean. keep up the good work :)

aniket said...

Don't really have words for it (and you probably know how rarely that happens!). Just to repeat what manish has said, it's truly awesome :)

alsas said...

it's just awesome man....

alsas said...

you made me senti dude......

Abhishek said...

@all: Thank you everyone! Thank you for the applause! I never thought this poem would be liked so much. :)

akshaysaad said...

"days of our lives" this phrase made me senti .

Collection...... said...

Katli poem hain be...
Sahi mein after this year we will miss every moment we spent here...

Ally said...

Hey its really nice...keep it up!!

richeek said...

Science, sahi main dil ko choo lene wali poem hai. Nice poem.

somani said...

I'm usually not interested in poetry.. but I must say, you've done a great job !!!. Kudos

rohit said...

very well written.. but should have posted it some time later... i mean we have some more time not to feel senti... :)

supercrazybhanu said...

Good one sainu bhai, but the timing was not correct you could have dedicated it to our ug4 batchmates during farewell or something....

Aditya said...

Really nice one. Trust me, there is no time like the college days.

Randeep said...

well written...thanx for this...its for all of us ug2k5...thanx

Ally said...

Awesome ! Its great ! I have no words...Keep it up !