today in my dream, in my deep sleep,
what I saw was what I now feel,
i'm gonna miss these days,
the days we've been together,
and had all the fun and pleasure,
i'm gonna miss these days,
the days that looked like forever,
but in the end seemed so less
these days of our lives...
the days are gone, leaving memories behind,
the bonds made stronger by the passage of time,
now we walk away on our paths of destiny or dream,
perhaps to get together later when our paths meet.
whatever the future be like,
it will never be the same,
like these days of our lives...
17 comments:
Wow... it was actually really good... I usually don't like the poems written by amateurs... but this looked genuine... it rhymed.. and more than that there a clarity in the flow of the 'theme idea' ... gr8 job !!!
awesome man......
its truly awesome :)
its good. neat and clean. keep up the good work :)
Don't really have words for it (and you probably know how rarely that happens!). Just to repeat what manish has said, it's truly awesome :)
it's just awesome man....
you made me senti dude......
@all: Thank you everyone! Thank you for the applause! I never thought this poem would be liked so much. :)
"days of our lives" this phrase made me senti .
Katli poem hain be...
Sahi mein after this year we will miss every moment we spent here...
Hey its really nice...keep it up!!
Science, sahi main dil ko choo lene wali poem hai. Nice poem.
I'm usually not interested in poetry.. but I must say, you've done a great job !!!. Kudos
very well written.. but should have posted it some time later... i mean we have some more time not to feel senti... :)
Good one sainu bhai, but the timing was not correct you could have dedicated it to our ug4 batchmates during farewell or something....
Really nice one. Trust me, there is no time like the college days.
well written...thanx for this...its for all of us ug2k5...thanx
Awesome ! Its great ! I have no words...Keep it up !
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