Thursday, January 15, 2009

More than average

Don't judge me wrong,
don't underestimate me,
don't mock me around,
don't show unwanted mercy,

I may not be better than the best,
but if you put me to the test,
I am more than average,
I will put your doubts to rest,
when you put me to the test,
coz I am more than average,

more than what you know,
more than what you see,
more than what meets the eye,
more than what you can dream,
more than what things may seem,
more than what you can ever try,

I can make things happen,
you can't even imagine,
face it, you can't even touch me,
reaching me would be like finding infinity,

don't think of me as small,
don't look down upon me,
pride goes before the fall,
hurt me and I won't let go easily,

I may not be better than the best,
but if you put me to the test,
I am more than average,
I will put your doubts to rest,
when you put me to the test,
coz I am more than average,

9 comments:

prateekgv said...

tried rapping it .. sounds good :)

Bhanukiran said...

as i said it this one is a song with which every person in this world can relate to. I am better than what you think of me. Btw whom do you want to prove man already everyone calls you scientist and bond :P

Rahul Tenany said...

ah! novice poet! why don't you write something more interesting?

Ojasvi Rajpal said...

nice theme and rhythm good going. Somehow I feel it would have felt much better if u replace the word avg. with best :)

Bhanukiran said...

yaar u did not mention the highlight thing only that you write such stuff when ur in the bathroom :D. Creativity is not bounded by location

aniket said...

A nice song written on a very original theme. Great!

"face it, you can't touch me,
reaching me would be like finding infinity,
"

doesn't rhyme properly.
I think you're improving steadily. Keep up the good work, bro :)

Abhishek said...

@all: Thanks for your nice comments, and yeah for reading the song. :)

prashy said...

nice :)

sowmya said...

its peak of confidence level...
wow!! i can say..
well penned..

keep writing & smiling always...